daffodil

The  daffodil is shiny as a shiny sun.

The daffodil gets watered in the rain our by a watering con is a thing what you can water with in your garden and in the school garden.

the daffodil blooms in the sun to be ready for summer next week on summer day daffodils grow in the sun.

the daffodil is colourful in the inside and the outside is colourful.

the daffodil starts blooming in the sun it shines in the sun it shines like a shiny planet will shine in the sun. Next time I can do more detail and more and colour on it.And what i like about my work is i did not  rush my work our my work will be wrong i need to put more different detail on my picture!

voyagers waka sketching

 this term my class is learning about voyagers. We all sat in a circle and miss. Forster
put a waka in the middle of the circle.


I had  to draw the waka but I only  draw the what I can see and not what I can not see.

this was my one.




I like I have shadings on my picture.

what I could do better is put more detail on my picture.

next time I can start more softer.